Blog 16: Type CATW practice 3

  In the passage How to do One thing at a time by women's health Magazine argues that multitasking a bad habit because has cognitive limits. According to the 2 group of student experiments, who are studying in Stanford University shows that single taskers  are better than multitasking peers. Other tremendous amount of evidence also shows that single tasker's brain does much better than multitaskers do.  But some experts believes that it could be possible to repair people's power of concentration
     "Talking on the phone is Dumb idea" I agree that multitasking break our concentration.  Multitasking has rapidly taken over and over our lives. For example, chatting with a friend while doing homework or talking on the phone while driving  are bad ideas. When doing many things at a time effects our brain because our brain have cognitive limits.
      Driving while talking on the phone it against bylaw. In many place we still see people driving while on their cell phones. Many people think that they can drive and handle cell phones without causing any accident but it is dangerous for people lives.  For example, my dad died in a car accident.  While he was driving, he was talking on the phone and with friend who was sitting next to him.
    ”Brain have cognitive limit.”  Multitasking affects our brain.  While we multitask, our brain concentration is less.  For example, when I tried to do all my homework at once I lost and my brain tired.  In addition, I think multitask has negative effect to our brain.
    In my point of view, multitasking break our concentration we have to do thing step by step, its more helpful than doing many thing at a time.

Blog 15: Revision of CATW 2

        In the passage The Woman Who Died In The Waiting Room by Jeneen Interlandi argues that hospitals employees didnt pay enough attention for the patient. Esmin Gareen who was in the Brooklyn psychiatric hospital fell out of her chair and died. She more than hour looking for anyone who can help her up.
        "Hospital employees left Esmin G. Alone in the waiting room more than hour". I believe that if hospital employees take care of their patient Esmin G. would be alive. Leaving alone elderly person can be dangerous. We can't leave person if she/he unable to move himself/herself. Every hospital has to have take care of elderly people and watch carefully, because injures from falling or some other fact can lead to the situation when the person becomes unable to move or even die. If hospital members leave alone their patient, they could fell and can remain lying on the floor for many hours or even someone discover them. Sometimes this situation could be result in death. In some hospital employees are so leazy. I think that they dont want to do their job and leave alone patients.
        Esmin G. Died from being left on the floor and ignored by several witnesses for over an hour. I feel bad for the Esmin G. It's very disappointing that hospital employees didn't do anything for her.

Blog 14: Learning from another ENG 099

After i looked up three essays referring to the article,The Dangers of Reality T.V,  I think  that the best essay from those  three essays is third one, because in first two essays the author wrote his  opinion in the summary. but author have a good structure and evedences. I choose third essay because author has clear summary, but has problem  with body paragraphs evidensces and reasons.

Blog 13: REVISION OF CATW 1

    In the passage  An education in citizenship , author argues that Illinois house passed a bill which allow the students  who are in the U.S  illegally to pay more out of pocket for their education in the state, although non-citizens immigrants pay far less. People don't want to see anyone deprived of a good eduction. In my point of view illegal students have to pay less than legal students.
    Many students from other state charge more than non citizen  immigrants. for example, friend of mine who came to NY from California and continuing her education in NY college.
   Citizenship is an ambiguous and complex term that can be hard to define, however it involves some of the following; its encourages people to get involve in community issues that affect their everyday lives, it ensure to promote a multi-cultural society, it enables people to develop the feeling of belongingness, it encourage Citizens to take social and moral responsibilities and it empower them to access the legal, political, Economical and Social Institutions that govern their lives. Nearly in all modern Societies, those that are regarded as Citizens must posses some sort of certifying documents such as passport, birth certificate or naturalisation. Most importantly, Citizens have a wide range of political, civil and social rights. However, such rights are balanced by certain obligations to both the

Blog 12: Consequentialism

The Gone, Baby, Gone is a film about the kidnapping. In the film, little girl Amanda was kidnapped by the captain to give her a better life because Captan own daughter was killed. Amanda's mother was a drug addict, horrible Mother. Patrick finally found Amanda in captan's house and decides to call the police and give Amanda back to her mother. But his girlfriend wants to keep Amanda with captan, because she will have a better life. His argument that he could not live with himself knowing that the girl was taken from her mother, even if she may have a better life, one day she might grow up and wish she knew her mother. It's basically a principle with him that he can absolutely never bend, even if it means that Amanda will eventually be worse, living with his mother.Giving the girl back to the mother was the right thing. Even if she would have had a better life with the police chief, who gets to judge parenting ability. The right thing to do is not always the easiest.

Blog 11: CATW practice 2

 In the passage The Woman Who Died In The Waiting Room by Jeneen Interlandi argues that  hospitals employees didnt pay enoug attention  and there not enough  beds for patient. Esmin Gareen  who was  in the Brooklyn psychiatric hospital  fell out of her chair and looking for anyone who can help her up. At that time hospital members did not realise that woman who was in the waiting room was in trouble and died.
- Leaving alone elderly person can be dangerous. I believe that we can't leave person if she/he unable to move himself/herself. Every hospital has to have take care of elderly people and watch carefully, because injures from falling or some other fact can lead to the situation when the person becomes unable to move or even die. If hospital members leave alone elderly person, they could fell and can remain lying on the floor for many hours or even someone discover them. Sometimes this situation could be result in death. - In some hospital employees are so leazy. I believe that they dont want to do their job.

Blog 10: Hero and anti-hero in the movie Hero

The "Hero" is movie about heroism. Movie concentrated  on Bernie LaPlante  and John Bubber who was the hero  and anti hero. In the movie Bernie LaPlante was looser and lier.  He has nothing even normal job. He was devorced with his wife and they had a one son. When Bernie LaPlante, was going to visit to his son,  he saw the on the road  airplane crash and people who was calling to help. Bernie LaPlante tookn of his shoes and  decided to help them. He save 00 people's life and also lady who was a journalist. During the airplan crash he lost hes one shous. Day after Bernie LaPlante met a homeless guy whos name was John Bubber.  Bernie LaPlante gave to him his one pair shoes and left.  Later that journalist who was saved by Bernie LaPlante found his one pair shoes near the lake and want to find him to give him 1 mln $. John Bubber came to this lady and said that he was the guy who save 00 people and her life